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April 6, 2011
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Apr 7, 2011, 12:20:16 AM
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:icontonkiboi:
ohk so i tryed somethig new used some color pencils soo be kind haha .. what you think ? seriously what do you like .. what do you not like .. blah blah blah you knwo the kinda stuff


im loooking for any coments .. you dont have to know fuck all about graff just give me your opinion ..
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~AERO-HDT Apr 16, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Nice work man, good style and ! Having done a few pieces, and knowing you want a straight up opinion and not just a "yeah cool n shit" post, I'll give it to you straight

The top of the "E" needs blunting. The pink doesn't really work (if it really is pink) - you should have used a hard red. Some of the edges need heavier shadow to add a bit of dimension and the crown could defo do with some symmetry.

Overall it's pretty decent. Some gap consistency would make it a much tighter piece. Did you pencil first or just ink?
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:icontonkiboi:
thanx cuz .. i mean i dont improve otherwise


na its not pink haha .. my light was just shit ..


depends // sometimes i in sometimes i pencil .. the base of the letter is penciled in and everything else i just added randomly haha
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~DARE-AYE Apr 8, 2011  Student
sick cuzz
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:icontonkiboi:
thanx bro xD
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I just think it's win ^.^
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:icontonkiboi:
thanx babe .. you knwo it means alot coming form you <3
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